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Roadkill, CP OC - BIO CRITIQUE PLEASE! by TensaiProductionz Roadkill, CP OC - BIO CRITIQUE PLEASE! by TensaiProductionz
Update 4/23/16: From the bio I redid his info on, so there is more info, including his backstory.

Update 11/21/16: Fixed a few things, including the weakness so he has short term memory loss.

Update 3/4/17: Changed the appearance of the bio, so if anyone likes it, please tell me - if something's off, please do tell me so I can possibly fix it. Even if I didn't change much of the info, I'm gonna get to that when I can.
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BASIC INFO

Real Name: James Wright
Alias/Nickname: Roadkill
Age: 18
Birthplace: Phoenix, Arizona
Current Residence: None; Latches onto people he targets, so he gets dragged around until he can find someone else to target.
Species: Deceased human, now a Wraith.
Gender: Male
D.O.B: 8/17/95
D.O.D: November, 18 2013, yet he can't remember it; victim to a hit and run accident and was buried off of a highway with the intention of being left to rot.

Appearance
  • Shaggy, dirty blonde hair
  • Ashen and transparent skin. (He once had freckles on and around his nose when he was alive and was darker due to getting sunburned at a young age; had some acne, though there were few.)
  • Still has brown eyes, but its shadowed out to the point of being mistaken for being black. Scleras are bloodshot. (Hazel brown and green when he was alive)
  • 5'11 ft.
  • 170 lb. when he was alive, but weightless as a ghost.
  • Not physically strong or athletic, but does have a medium body build; tall.
  • Wears a torn and dirty sweater over a dark green shirt, pale blue jeans, and pair of converse shoes. There is dirt, mud, and blood on the entire outfit.
  • He has scraps on the left side of his face, bruise marks on his neck in the shape of hands, a severely broken leg, a cracked open skull and decomposing right face and eye, showing visible bones. Looks zombie-like.
  • Voice is raspy and wheezy thanks to the damage to his ribs and lungs.

Personality:
As he grew up, he was always uncertain and shy around others, even with his dad; because of his stuttering problem, he often kept quiet and shut in, and if he did have to speak, it would be more of a mutter or a whisper. He would be under a lot of stress if he was in public, or was stuck in a small, enclosed space, where he would try his best to leave and sit down somewhere to calm his breathing, or he would have a panic attack and - given enough time - would pass out; he even avoids people as much as possible, and would become fearful if someone was to be around him. He's really passive, not expressing his thoughts or ideas; unsociable, afraid, and a nervous wreck; never violent or loud. But when he's alone, he likes to let his mind wander, often finding solace in reading books, or going out for walks on his own. The only thing that he would approach with caution was animals, but would be too afraid to touch them.

After his death and his soul coming back to haunt, he's more anger prone and bitter, with a short temper and aggressive nature if you were to approach him, but if the person was stronger or larger than him, he would flee; this is why some call him a coward, but he still keeps away from others, as it's part of his loner nature. He doesn't do well under stress, like if he was to get caught or cornered, and would lead to him to panic attacks and stuttering.

Why/How he kills:
Since Roadkill is not subjected to one place, he wanders around, often glanced at by others while it was night. He targets couples, but would mostly go after those with a trouble in the relationship, and would end up getting the one cheating/lying/being abusive, then would go after the victim of the relationship as his way to show mercy from a life of pain and loneliness.

He starts by following them, but gives the appearance of being a normal guy walking around, making them jumpy, nervous and paranoid as he continued to follow them around where they went. As the progress got worse, the target would start having nightmares about him showing his real form to them, and he would also start becoming physical with them - throwing them to the ground, hitting them, tripping them down stairs, leaving claw marks, bruising them, etc. - while not letting the target hardly sleep at all - the average person cannot go without sleep for more than a week or 11 days - and would be more visible with them around where ever they went. Many would try to treat this for FFI or chronic insomnia, but he would continue to hang around them.

This would cause the chosen target become living in their fear, always afraid of Roadkill possibly popping up; at this point, the person's life was ruined by all means, both socially, mentally, and emotionally. Once he sees that the victim is miserable enough, he would either kill them through something that could be considered an accident, having them consumed by fear to the point of cardiac arrest, or push them to the point of them committing suicide. He would then track the remaining victim down and would say insulting things, like, "You really thought they loved you?" "Who would like a little bitch/bastard like you?", then would kill them, and go off to find another couple to kill.

He's subconsciously looking for Chelsie, but he's taking out couples that have troubled relationships, as he sees them like how he was with his ex-girlfriend, and takes them both out. (Has a deep hatred thanks to Chelsie breaking his trust of her, and now takes it out on couples, or those with a troubled relationship)


Strengths:
Being a ghost, physical attacks don't affect him; he is smart and prefers to observe and learn before striking his victim, and he can manipulate his appearance to blend in with places and mess with his victims, though only his certain targets are able to really see him. He can phase through objects and buildings as well as people, being able to disappear and reappear, and is able to touch physical objects. And because of his ghostly abilities, his form can feed off of the negative emotions that was felt when someone was betrayed, hurt, in pain, or depressed. Also, if he lingers around people that are couples or have strong emotions of love for someone, he can manipulate their emotional state to be more tired, irritated, or down

Weaknesses:
Not physically strong or fast, and he can only keep his appearance up for a short period of time before he reverts back to his normal appearance, as his form in real life was weak, so he often disappears to recover. He still has problem talking, but often doesn't speak, and has a hostile personality to anyone that tries to approach him.

He avoids churches and exorcists, as he knows that he can be sent to Purgatory if he was exorcised, or was caught in a spell or trap.

Once he becomes scared, he starts stuttering - the more he stutters, the likely chance for him to go into a panic attack, though any strong and negative emotion can send him into the range of an attack.

Due to the damage to his brain as he was dying, James has short-term memory loss; thanks to this, he can't remember who exactly he killed, or what his reasoning to do so was, or what most of his past was while he was alive. While this may not be because of his memory loss, he represses his memory of his death, along with what Chelsie looks like and what she was to him while he was alive. But he still has that drive to kill those he suspects of cheating along with a deep hatred to those he knows of being a cheater.

Allies/Friends: (Open to friends)

Enemies/Rivals: Most of the CP fandom OCs, but he prefers to avoid them, rather than face them.

Family:
  • Father: Brandon Wright
  • 42; Active
  • Mother: Jessica Kresto
  • 42; Unknown
Relationship/Partner: His first relationship was with Chelsie Francis when he was still alive, and was paired with Kaunis at one point (Owned by :iconsaiyantrash666: ). Now he's single, but he's not open for pairings.


BACKSTORY: (Will be edited in the future, so it's not an official of his past)
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CREEPYPASTA STORY: (N/A for now)



OTHER INFO:

Likes: When he was alive, he liked being alone with his dog, rainy days, books, cool or cold weather, coffee, long walks, caramel, peace and quiet, looking at animals, and being around his dad.

Dislikes: Being alive he hated loud noises or music, large groups of people, hot weather, the color blue, peppermint, chocolate, soda and junk food, public speaking, and tight places. Now he dislikes affection or feelings of love.

Hobbies: When he was still alive he liked walking alone mostly, reading, and staring off into space, but now he just prefers to walk around places to find his next victim.

Fears: Remembering who killed him, physical interactions, society, speaking, and small spaces.

Disorders: Social Anxiety disorder (if he stays around people for too long, it can lead to panic attacks), Claustrophobia, and Neurogenic Stuttering from the head trauma he gained when he was a kid.


-Can't remember faces very well thanks to the damage to his right temporal lobe, which also messes with his sense of smell and sound, semantics in speech and vision, which can turn into long-term memory. His ability to speak is impaired thanks to the damage to the right temporal lobe.

-Had head trauma that was with him since he was a kid, which was the main reason why he began stuttering to begin with, but the after effects of the event made it more like a cause from bad experience as a child, which would go with him to his teenage years.

-Since his anger builds slowly, his appearance changes - the more enraged he gets, the more his appearance decomposes, until he really looks like a walking zombie.



Originally, I had used a template from :iconvintricktive:, so if you want a link to it, please tell me and I'll edit it into the bio.
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DrownedTrying Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Could he and my OC, the Musician, be somewhat acquaintances or friends? Like, not super close, but also not very distant friendship-wise?
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
I'm sorry, but I'm only allowing friends to be with my OC.
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DrownedTrying Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Okay, that's fine
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GamergirlNS Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, that is terrifying. This is just me, but I'd think another scare factor would be that they couldn't see his eyes or he had gaping holes as eyes are windows to soul or souless I should say.
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Some would kinda make that comparison when they first see him, so it adds to the first impression.
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AymsBaggins Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Roadkill, my man ~
He's still a villain number one!
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nightmarequeenkasei Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist
Ooooooh he's so cool looking!!!!
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MikaTheBlueKitty Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Student Artist
Hey, his outfits is cool:D
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks ^^
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MikaTheBlueKitty Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Student Artist
YW^^
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paleskytheomega1 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I haven't read the full bio, but I must say the reason for killing is really good based on CP standards.

Coffee's bad for everyone. Trust me. I'm a caffeine addict.
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks XD
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Exceed-Hero Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks so detail and amazing. Man, I wish I can make a character as great as this guy.
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Unknown72949 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! ^w^/
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Unknown72949 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course comrade ^^

You can use my OCs as friends or enemies if you want
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DistortingLullaby Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student General Artist
HOLY SHIZ SO THIS IS ROADKILL QwQ he's so cool, why haven't I seen him sooner?! XD I rlly feel sorry for em... dang... he's rlly thought out and solid imo...

Oh and... SIDE RELATIONSHIP WITH EDGE— jk jk I'm so sorry Tensai don't unfriend me QwQ *goes in corner of shame*
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
XD *pats head* It's alright. And I'm surprised that so many people have even liked and viewed this corpse.
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DistortingLullaby Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student General Artist
Look at him! His design is so cool and gorey, and his bio is great too! Why wouldn't they? XD
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:icontensaiproductionz:
TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I don't know XD
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DistortingLullaby Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student General Artist
Shhh Tensai u kno very well why ppl love him XD
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
XDD
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PrimeMinisterNatas Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
Rather interesting 
seems very well done 
awsome
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks ^^
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PrimeMinisterNatas Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
Np I live to serve 
hmmm
gives me an idea
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:icontensaiproductionz:
TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
What idea?
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:iconprimeministernatas:
PrimeMinisterNatas Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
Of how to set up my bios
thank you ^^
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Do you plan on using the template?
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PrimeMinisterNatas Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
Maybe....hmm
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
If you do, I just suggest going to the creator's account to find it.
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YU-GEN Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i didn't read the bio at all tbh but i'm faving this because i have a little gore aesthetic aaa ;;
bless ur art
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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liamthefox34 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
C-can I ask you to be friends/Allies with my Shannon
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I don't see why not ^^
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liamthefox34 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks <3
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
You're very welcome! ^^
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really good and detailed character ^_^
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome :)
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mayonaka19 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
wow.., i love all the blood and the details in his wounds.., its amazing..^^ 
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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mayonaka19 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome..:D
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charlottelaantz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Roadkill and Chainz is my absolute favs of you! like omg they are awesome!
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I'm thinking of editing Roadkill a bit to improve him, but I'm kinda slow at the moment.
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charlottelaantz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're going to do it again? :O
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
*shrug* Yeah, I'm just not happy with what I have for him right now.
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charlottelaantz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*pats head* well yeah i can understand that, have the same problem here with one of my OC's .-.

But i still love how you created roadkill :3
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks anyway! :)
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charlottelaantz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i'm just honest ^-^
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TensaiProductionz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
And I thank you for your honest, anyway. :D
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